Beautifully done! Great job portraying the contrast between the Jared/Mr. Ackles relationship and the Jared/Jensen relationship. The fact that they were already in a relationship (and that it was their anniversary!) made me squee and d'awwww so much! ♥!

Also, I adore this paragraph:
The office is Jensen's domain. He's the boss, no questions asked. The house is Jared's. When he wants it, he leads, takes control. It's not about the control though, Jensen knows. Not about strength, payback, or power. Well, maybe a little. This is their balance. The circumstances of their relationship aren’t ideal, but this helps. Makes them fit that extra bit more.
It just tells us so much about their dynamic. ♥! Awesome awesome job! ^_^