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instinct & taste | epilogue

  • Jul. 10th, 2012 at 3:35 PM
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TWO YEARS LATER

THE OLD VILLAGE
MOUNT PLEASANT, SOUTH CAROLINA


At eight o’clock in the morning, the songs of the early birds are drowned out by the birds who are just now waking up, and all of them are apparently gathered in the oak tree outside Jensen’s bedroom window.

He rolls away, hits the warm slope of Jared’s shoulder, and buries his head as far below the covers as he can, but the chirping’s incessant. Last night, he’d fallen asleep listening to the off-beat chorus of tree frogs that congregate in their neighbor’s bamboo fountain (which is nice and full thanks to the almost daily rainstorms moving through the Lowcountry), and clearly it had been too much to hope that he’d wake up to tranquility.

None of this bothers Jared who could fall asleep in the middle of a hurricane—and had last summer, although technically it’d only been classified as a tropical storm. Jared snuffles in his sleep, curling towards Jensen’s chest, and when his legs nudge Jensen’s apart, looking for cooler square-footage on the sheets, Jensen takes sharp notice of the erection poking his hip.

“G’morning,” Jensen mumbles, knowing from years of practice that his voice is one of the things sure to break into Jared’s sleep coma (along with Dundee’s barking and the smell of bacon). It’s difficult to translate Jared’s drowsy murmurs; easier to relax into the heat of Jared’s lips curling over his shoulder—not exactly a traditional good-morning kiss, but the pressure releases a thousand tiny tingles that run all the way down to Jensen’s toes.

Jared continues open-mouthed kissing his skin, over the hill of his bicep and around the bend of his elbow. Muscles waking up, the weight of sleep evaporates from his chest as Jared’s touch sparks life and burns away the lethargy. Two years, more or less, and Jensen’s never taken waking up like this for granted.

“Not sure we have time for what you’re thinking,” Jensen says, spreading his fingers out against the back of Jared’s neck.

“Take the day off.” The request comes from somewhere around Jensen’s navel.

“I can’t,” he says, combing Jared’s hair away from his forehead. “There’s a…ahhh.” Jared nuzzles his hipbones. “I have a meeting about features for the next issue.”

“Well I’m horny,” Jared says, licking the sheet-wrinkled skin of Jensen’s stomach, “and I’m not letting you leave this bed until that’s taken care of.”

For a second, Jensen’s in full agreement with Jared’s plan (what meeting?) until he remembers: “Wait, you completely cut me off last week.”

Rubbing the point of his chin over Jensen’s hip, Jared hums, and the vibration sinks through the layers of his skin. “I had presentations and papers.”

“I had needs.”

“Shut up. I’m not your wife.”

Jensen sweeps his fingers along Jared’s cheekbone, checking him lightly under the jaw. “You would be if it were legal here.”

“Totally,” Jared agrees before biting his finger. “Now can we have sex, please?”

“Since you’re being polite…”

Jared bowls him over, smothers him with a wide stretch of body heat that’s soothing on this rare cool morning. He opens himself to Jared’s mouth, arms flung across the sheets as Jared kisses over his chest and up between his collarbones.

“I get foreplay?” Jensen asks, rolling his throat to create a bridge for Jared’s lips. “I must’ve done something pretty good.”

“You were pretty good last night,” Jared compliments while he leans up to nuzzle behind Jensen’s ear.

Jensen rakes his hands over Jared’s temples, clasping around the back of his neck. He holds Jared enough to feel every breath against his skin. Their mouths may be too sour to kiss, but Jensen intends to enjoy Jared’s nonetheless. “Gunning for a repeat performance?”

Nips that tease with hints of teeth, a tongue that beguiles as it exploits Jensen’s sensitivity, Jared rolls his cock against Jensen’s thigh and says, “Feels like you’re up for it.”

To drive that point home, Jensen uses his legs to upset Jared’s balance and roll him onto his back, kicking the sheets away at the same time. Fresh air wafts down upon Jensen’s back from the ceiling fan, a contrast to Jared’s warm skin beneath him. He settles his weight on Jared’s chest, curling his fingers loosely around Jared’s upper arms.

“Right now?” Jared asks, cradling Jensen’s hips between his thighs. Jensen nods, and Jared takes a deep, extended breath. The inhale lifts Jensen’s upper body; the exhale brings him back. Feeling Jared’s strength in such a small but intimate way has been one of Jensen’s favorite sensations since they got together two years ago, and he never fails to take advantage when he has Jared, flat on his back and willing, and a little extra time.

They undulate for a moment, Jared with a firm grip around Jensen’s waist. Not surprisingly, Jensen’s hard and he feels Jared’s cock swelling even more alongside his. After a week of missing one another because of Jared’s presentations and graduation preparations, and last night’s increasingly physical celebrations, Jensen’s in no rush to get off, but Jared is tossing his head around on the pillow, blush diffusing down his throat.

“Get the lube,” Jensen says, pushing up onto his knees to avoid taking an elbow to the face as Jared scrambles for the nightstand. The offer is already on Jensen’s lips: “Want me to—”

Jared shakes his head, coating Jensen’s cock with the lube he’d poured into his palm. “I’m still loose from last night.”

Which might be true; he’d fucked Jared twice. By the time they’d fallen into a sex coma, Jared was wide open and wet. Jensen had lazed for long minutes pushing his fingers through the slick, teasing Jared’s slack rim and soothing his sleepy moans. Another round right then would have broken Jensen’s cock, but he’s stalk-hard and willing now. However, he’s not eager to take Jared with only last night’s come and lube to ease the way.

Jensen snatches the lube from Jared’s hands, sinks his coated fingers into Jared knuckle by knuckle. He is loose, but Jensen would rather be safe than sorry. That, and he loves how responsive Jared is when Jensen’s breaching him with his fingers first.

“Come on, Jen,” Jared whines. “I told you—”

“I know what I’m doing, thanks,” Jensen says, knocking Jared’s python legs away before they squeeze him into submission. He exposes the shine of a day-old bruise on the inside of Jared’s left thigh, faint pink impressions of teeth ringing an oval of reddish-brown. Sense memory reminds him that he’d seared the mark into Jared’s skin with his teeth and tongue last night, eager to remind Jared what he’d been missing during his grueling final weeks of business school. He’s tempted to renew its luster this morning, only now he’d be staking his claim.

Jared whines from the back of his throat when Jensen’s lips tease the bite mark, leg muscles quivering. He doesn’t yank his limb out of Jensen’s reach though, and Jensen smirks against Jared’s skin after he leaves the bruise glistening with saliva, ringed by a fresh set of bite impressions.

“Jensen,” he pleads, his body doing its best to grasp and pulse around Jensen’s fingers. “Please…”

As much as he would like to punish Jared for freezing him out last week with soft touches and a leisurely attitude, Jensen’s cock is hot and throbbing, watery lube dripping down onto Jared’s balls. It’s impossible for Jensen to think as he enters Jared’s body, processing nothing beyond the give and stretch of Jared’s muscles; the way his inner walls clench and pull like a game of tug and war with Jensen’s cock as the prize.

Soon the spine-melting press of in-in-in turns to the satisfying rhythm of out-in-out. Jensen saws into Jared’s body, knees digging into the mattress for leverage.

“Fuck, I’ve missed this,” Jared groans, latching his ankles around Jensen’s back.

“What about last night?”

“It wasn’t enough.” Jared gasps, neck cording as he twists into Jensen’s thrusts, inner muscles coaxing Jensen deeper. Jared’s eyes screw shut, mouth wide on a silent roar, and Jensen knows he’s found the perfect angle to batter Jared’s prostate. Last night, they’d fucked in half a dozen different positions, frantic and impatient, each one better than the last. Now, face-to-face with his boyfriend, Jensen doesn’t want to switch. They’re lined up perfectly, hips slotting together again and again like worn gears sliding into place.

“C’mere, Jen,” Jared breathes, tongue darting out to meet Jensen’s as they fold into one another. His hands skim up Jensen’s back, nails scraping over his shoulder blades. Behind Jensen’s neck, Jared intertwines his fingers, keeping Jensen’s lips prisoner against his.

“Close?” Jensen asks, slipping the single word past Jared’s blockade of his mouth. Jared swipes his tongue behind Jensen’s teeth, groaning, before dropping his hands and releasing Jensen’s lips. “I’ll get you there, Jay. Let me see you work your cock.”

Rearing up, Jensen watches Jared wrap one hand around his raw, desperate flesh, stroking in time with Jensen’s lunges. He pistons in and out with added power, forcing his dick over Jared’s prostate. His heart beats against his chest, counting down the seconds before pleasure takes him, but he needs to see Jared get off first.

“Faster, Jay,” he directs, breathless. “I know you’re so close.”

And he’s right; Jared seizes, his grip going solid as he comes all over his stomach. Semen gathers in the valley between his abdominal muscles, slick and opaque and delicious if Jensen could just get his tongue down there to taste.

Jensen keeps pounding through Jared’s completion, every half-broken sound from Jared’s mouth urging him on. Grips Jared’s thighs and holds them around his waist, nails digging scalloped rows into Jared’s skin. Jensen breaks on his final thrust, knees sliding out from under him as orgasm rips through his muscles.

Quicker on the recovery, Jared gathers Jensen against his chest. “Mmm, good morning,” he says, barely wincing as Jensen pulls out.

“It was, huh?”

“Aren’t you glad you stayed in bed just a little longer?” Jared asks.

Jensen leans up, savoring the sweet kiss Jared drops on his lips. “Always. But now I’m really going to be late.” He sees Jared’s mouth starting to fold into a pout and trades him another kiss. “Totally worth it, though. Maybe I should call out sick…”

“Reid would see right through you,” Jared says, moving to stretch but giving up halfway through, tucking his face back into his pillow. “Better get going.”

“Fine,” Jensen huffs. “Are you gonna get up?”

Jared’s nope is muffled in the down pillow; Jensen can’t blame him. The last few weeks have been rough, and if Jared wants to savor four days off from any kind of responsibility (even Scott had insisted Jared cash in his vacation time) until his family flies in for his Master’s ceremony later in the week, Jensen’s not going to argue with him.

Jared doesn’t get out of bed until Jensen’s finished with his shower and starting to get dressed. He ambles past Jensen to their bathroom, idly scratching his belly. The mottled flush is fading from his skin and his cock hangs down along his right thigh. Transfixed, Jensen almost abandons the buttons to kneel at Jared’s feet and indulge his palate with velvety soft, musky skin. But he’s already used up his quota of ‘morning sex’ excuses with Reid (who sympathized at first), and today’s meeting is an important one.

Instead, Jensen asks, “You still up for dinner tonight?”

It catches Jared in the middle of a yawn. “Huh?”

“Dinner downtown. I mentioned it last night, but then we got a little distracted…”

“Mmm, right,” Jared says, walking back into the bedroom. He grabs running shorts and a College of Charleston School of Business t-shirt from the dresser. “Are we going to Cru? It’s been a while since you’ve seen Dom.”

“Maybe. I haven’t made reservations yet.”

“Just text me with the time and place.” Dressed for his morning run around their cozy, Old Village neighborhood, Jared walks up to Jensen with lips begging for a kiss. Jensen’s mouth is so fresh and tingly from the minty rinse, he barely minds the bitterness on Jared’s tongue. “I’m gonna take Dundee with me to the beach later. Genevieve and her boyfriend are bringing tons of food. You sure you can’t come down for a little while?”

“I’ve got a crazy day.” Jensen wishes he could tell Jared the whole of it, but the deception will pay off later. “But tell Gen I said hello.”

Jared picks up his sneakers and walks off, stretching as he disappears down the hall. Dundee’s sharp barks punctuate Jared’s thunk-pause-thunk as he stomps down the stairs, cooing to their Australian shepherd mix when he gets to the bottom. Jensen hurries to finish dressing, a smile on his face the entire time.



The enormous red and blue dolphin tail of a cruise ship leaps above Charleston’s low skyline from where it’s docked at the Cooper River terminal. Jensen can see it as he walks down Meeting Street with Jared, weaving through packs of map-clutching tourists pausing to take pictures in front of pre-Civil War buildings, wrought iron gates protecting courtyard gardens, and cemeteries overgrown with ivy.

Turning off Meeting, Jensen leads Jared past a stone-laid piazza set just off the main road. It’s shaded from the sunset by a series of arbors and trellises. Beyond, stands a three-story building of brick, stone, and stucco whose true age is tough to place. Iron rails enclose narrow balconies that protrude here and there from the upper floors. At street level, expansive picture windows open onto the tranquil beauty of downtown; a line of crepe myrtles garnished with pink and white blooms dot the sidewalk.

Jensen stops in front of a particular window while Jared keeps walking, oblivious until he goes to say something and wises to the fact that Jensen’s behind him.

“Don’t tell me you’re lost,” he sighs, retracing his steps.

“Nope,” Jensen says, “this is the place.”

Approaching the window, Jared cups his hands and peers inside. Jensen rocks on his heels, studying Jared’s face for a reaction, but all he sees is the dark shadow reflected from inside.

“Doesn’t look like there’s anyone here yet.” Jared leans away and checks his watch. “Are we early?” he asks. “I don’t see a sign. When do you think they open?”

Jensen’s heart is beating at a nervous jitter, face fighting a grin. “This fall.”

“So why—” Jared stops and whatever else he’s going to say falls into the unknown, lost forever. He looks between Jensen and the empty storefront, his oak green eyes unscrambling the clues.

Wait for it…

Jen,” is all Jared manages to say before physical reaction subdues his speech. The way Jensen’s grin breaks out into a cheek-splitting smile is confirmation enough for Jared to launch himself over the cobblestones and smother Jensen in a hug.

“Oh my god. Oh my god,” Jensen listens to Jared repeat with less and less breath each time. He lets Jared have his freak out (because Jensen’s had more than his share already), happily enduring the way Jared sways around with him on the sidewalk in a dance that must look absurd to anyone strolling down the side street.

“I can’t believe it’s finally happening. How did you—” Jared tries, cutting himself off. “Why didn’t you tell me?”

“It came together pretty quickly,” Jensen admits. “Reid’s been scouting the space for a while, and as soon as it opened up, he called me and we had to jump.” He tilts his chin towards the dappled sunlight shining through low-hanging branches. “It’s perfect though, isn’t it?”

“I don’t think you could have picked a better location,” Jared says, touched by wonder. Then the business slice of his mind jumps into the conversation. “Reid decided to invest then?”

“He thought it’d be great to have a restaurant to tie in with the magazine. Debuting recipes instead of simply writing about them, holding special events and tastings, and really becoming a part of the city rather than just retelling the stories. And Josh wants to be a part of this, too,” Jensen adds. “The firm’s got him set up pretty well here.”

“And he’ll always support his little brother,” Jared tacks on with a laugh. “This is amazing, Jen. Seriously. Your own restaurant—you’ve worked so damn hard to get back here, and I can’t wait to help out in any way you need me to.”

Jensen grins. “That’s good, because there’s gonna be a hell of a lot of paperwork hitting your desk as soon as you graduate.”

“My—” Jared stutters through his surprise. “You want to hire me?”

“There’s no one else I’d even consider,” Jensen tells him, heart filled to bursting on this cool Lowcountry night. “Plus, I’m planning on keeping you close for stress relief.”

“Stress relief?”

“Sexual favors.”

“For the right salary,” Jared says, “we can definitely work something out.”

From his pocket, Jensen pulls out a set of keys. They jangle in his fingers, and it’s the best sound Jensen’s heard in a long time—proof that Jensen managed to achieve his dream. He’s investing the majority of his savings into the restaurant (including his Chopped winnings and the profit he’d made from selling his condo), but he knows the payoff will be even greater.

“Feel like taking a look inside?”

“Inside our new restaurant?” Jared grabs Jensen’s hand, tugging him towards the door. “I’m about to steal those keys from you if you don’t hurry the hell up!”

Jensen stops at the door and imagines the way this stretch of sidewalk might look a few months from now. Potted urns with lush vines and edible flowers (not actually for eating, but they’re great visuals); the arbors and trellises wound with rich colors and shade-giving leaves on the patio; windows that beckon passers-by with an atmosphere that’s not to be missed; their menu proudly displayed beside the door.

“Wait.” Jared stops Jensen before he can turn the key. “Does this mean I get to pick out a name?”

“For the restaurant?” Jensen teases. “Maybe.”

“I’ve been keeping a list for almost two years, waiting until you had your own place,” Jared says. “How about Jay’s Porch?”

“Are you the Jay?” Jensen asks. “Because I think I should be the Jay.”

“Eh, I’m not big on that one, actually. How does Thicket sound?”

“Too much like a steakhouse at an outdoor mall.”

“Cedar?”

Jensen laughs. “Do you have a thing for trees?”

“Whatever,” Jared says, not looking bothered in the slightest. “I’ll come up with something better.”

Jensen rolls his eyes but it’s for show; Jared’s enthusiasm is the fuel that will keep him running when the planning gets tough. He’s been through worse, but with a true friend like Reid backing him up, Josh standing beside him, and Jared as his partner, Jensen will rise to the occasion, adding his signature to the list of Charleston’s masters of cuisine.

“Oh my god,” Jared groans, tightening his grip on Jensen’s hand. “Open the door before I do some serious damage to our restaurant!”

They take their first breath of entrepreneurship together before Jared’s mouth is running with ideas. Jensen tries not to vibrate out of his skin with the way Jared’s excitement is affecting him.

Jensen’s planning to wait until they’re home before revealing the final surprise, because he’s already chosen the name of his new restaurant—seven letters drying on the paperwork back in Jensen’s office.

Tristan.


FIN.



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[identity profile] visionshadows.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 05:34 pm (UTC)
This was absolutely fantastic! I loved this story, the up and down roller coaster of emotions, the plot, and the food! Thanks so much for sharing this story with us.
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2012 02:43 am (UTC)
I was hoping y'all would enjoy the food in this! That was the best part of the research :P Thank you so much for the comment!
[identity profile] sixgunsound.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 06:03 pm (UTC)
This was amazing! I loved the build up of Jared and Jensen's relationship, and all the food! The name Jensen picked for the restaurant is just adorable :)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2012 02:45 am (UTC)
'Tristan' is a real restaurant here in Charleston, and that named started this entire story going. It was perfect! And thank you for the lovely comment :)
[identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 06:41 pm (UTC)
That was fun!! I can't believe you had them hold off for so long (Jared was far more mature in that than any guy I've ever known, bless him!! LOL) but man, you totally cracked me up with your taste explosion description of their bedroom antics - rhubarb and leek bwhahahahahah!!! I had tears in my eyes so thanks for that. ♥
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2012 03:38 am (UTC)
Jared was acting pretty mature, but he had some great motivation :) He wanted Jensen for keeps! And yes, I had fun with the food-esque sex descriptions...cracking myself up along the way!

Thank you for the comment!
[identity profile] dont-hate-me01.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 07:03 pm (UTC)
What a culinary experience! You've done an amazing job with this fic. Not only in the way you described the in and outs of the kitchen in a very busy and successful restaurant, but also in the way you build up your characters. Your dishes made me hungry, the hotness of the fic made me drool and in the end I can only award you with top culinary accolade out there!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:00 pm (UTC)
I'm happy my YEARS of toil in restaurants paid off like this ;) Kitchens produce the craziest characters, I swear! Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback!
[identity profile] ace-p.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 07:34 pm (UTC)
This was AMAZING!!!!!!!
I loved every freaking word of it! Omg!
This was awwwwwwsome!
Great work, great writing, epically fun and lovely story to read!
Holy hell!
Awesome! High five!
Cheers!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I love the enthusiasm, it's making me all giddy :)
[identity profile] triceybabe.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 07:47 pm (UTC)
So cute! Loved it!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:01 pm (UTC)
I'm so happy you did, thank you!
ext_57687: (♥ actor | ja smiling!)
[identity profile] big-heart-june.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 08:17 pm (UTC)
eeeeee! Tristan! I LOVE! Wow, this was such a delightful cleverly written and totally addictive delicious read!! I loved every single word. Gosh, all the food descriptions and kitchen scenes were fantastic as was the lovely build-up of the Js relationship ♥ also! VERY HOT sexy times! gah!

Wonderful, wonderful job, BB! ♥
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:05 pm (UTC)
'Tristan' is the name that started it all with this story! And it only took me 45,000 words to get to that name LOL. My brain, sometimes! It's ridiculous. Thanks so much, bb, and THANK YOU for the rec on your journal! ♥
[identity profile] tamaryn.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 09:13 pm (UTC)
That was amazing! The artwork, the trailer, the story.. I could see the whole story while I was reading.. Seriously great work! Thank you so much for this!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I love creating vivid visuals, and I wanted y'all to SEE and TASTE along with Jensen and Jared :)
[identity profile] cmsserenity.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 10:15 pm (UTC)
This was, in a word, delicious.

Thank you for sharing your work with us.
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:07 pm (UTC)
Delicious! Perfect compliment, thank you so much ♥
[identity profile] mollya.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 10:19 pm (UTC)
Wow. I wanted this story to last forever.
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2012 12:07 pm (UTC)
For my brain's sake I'm glad it ended, but I love these characters so there might be more in their future ;) thank you!
[identity profile] klutzy-girl.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 10:40 pm (UTC)
This was awesome! I loved it so much. Glad Jensen finally got so fed up he quit like that. And I'm so happy it was the catalyst to him and Jared finally getting together! I literally went "awww" over Jensen choosing Tristan as the restaurant's name. So cute!

Edited 2012-07-11 10:40 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2012 12:42 pm (UTC)
Jensen definitely wouldn't have been able to hold out much longer, and as patient as Jared was trying to be, I don't think he would have LET Jensen stay! Thank you ;)
[identity profile] harrigan.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 10:53 pm (UTC)
I think my favorite part was Jared recognizing that he made Jensen happy -- and that if they tried to have more together while Jensen was still working for Miranda, they would both end up miserable. Wise boy.

And lovely fic!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2012 12:45 pm (UTC)
The relationship definitely wouldn't have lasted if Jensen had stayed - not a pretty picture. But my guys were smart (and a little stubborn!) so it had to work out. Thanks so much for the lovely feedback!
[identity profile] maryluna.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 11:02 pm (UTC)
Wow, loved this story so much!
The food, Jensen's issues, evil Dawson, hideous boss - I've blanked her name because I hated her so much, good job with making a believably evil antagonist that definitly motivates our protagonist to greater heights! Jared's sweetness and stolidity... I wish there were 20 or so chapters of this.
Any chance of time stamps and/or sequels.... I'd love to read about Jensen's Chopped experience... especially if the judges were Alex, Marcus and Aaron... my three faves.
xo
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2012 12:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Miranda wasnt supposed to be well-liked, of course, but she had her own reasons for treating Jensen the way she did...not that it excuses her, or especially Paul LOL. I do love my villains! And I'll definitely think about timestamps because I would loooooooove to write Jensen's Chopped experience! :)
[identity profile] deansgirl369.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2012 11:05 pm (UTC)
this was really really fun! i was so confused as to why jared pulled away after they had sex, so glad you explained. it was original and interesting! thanks for sharing! =} oh, and 'tristan'? perfect name!! =}

Edited 2012-07-11 11:07 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2012 12:52 pm (UTC)
You're not the only one who was confused ;) I'm pretty sure Jensen was all o_O as well! But the boys muddled through and got their happy ending, as I love giving them. Thanks for the comment!
[identity profile] katsheswims.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 12:04 am (UTC)
It was awesome! I loved it!

Jensen and Jared's relationship was very realistic. Jared's reasons for not dating Jensen were valid--though I don't know if he could have held out for a long time because they obviously cared a lot for each other.

I was so happy when Jensen finally quit. I hope he hears about Miranda and her restaurant going under.

I love that Jensen did go on Chopped (and won)!

All the food made me hungry. Great job describing it, and Jensen's passion--it really came through.

Overall a great story! (With bonus hot sex.)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:08 am (UTC)
You're right - Jared wouldn't have been able to hold out much longer if Jensen hadn't quit when he did! It was tough for both of them, but definitely worth it in the end ♥ And I figured y'all could fill in the blanks concerning what happened to Paul and Miranda...Jensen and Jared are way too happy to ever think about the two of them! ;)

Thanks so much for all the wonderful things you've had to say about this story - reading stuff like this makes writing so much more rewarding for us!

Edited 2012-07-16 02:09 am (UTC)
[identity profile] eyestoowide.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 12:27 am (UTC)
This was such a fun read! I'm a total sucker for chef AUs, so this was right up my alley. I loved the build up of their relationship, and I really enjoyed all the food talk and the kitchen scenes. I'm definitely adding this one to the re-read pile. :)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:10 am (UTC)
I'm glad you love chef!AU's! They're so much fun to play with, and I think Jensen makes a perfect chef :) Re-reads are the best kind of compliment, so thank you very much for saying that!
[identity profile] cherry916.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 02:53 am (UTC)
Omg hun this was an amazing read! I was enthralled for about 3 hours doing nothing but reading this and I definitely don't regret it. The perfect mix of humor and angst like a great dish that just goes together. So much excellent terminology for Chefs and cooking but not so big that I couldn't easily understand all the fancy food talk.

And the ending was just perfect! ♥ It tied everything together nicely.

I knew I would enjoy this.
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:13 am (UTC)
I'm so happy all the food details worked for you - I definitely wanted to describe everyday things in food-terms as well as describe the kitchen vividly enough for y'all to picture the scenes. And after working on this for so long, hearing that you enjoyed reading it so much is amazing. It does a writer's heart good, thank you! ♥

Edited 2012-07-16 02:13 am (UTC)
[identity profile] fobsessed54.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 03:04 am (UTC)
I LOVED IT. OMG I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT.
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:45 am (UTC)
I'm so happy you did! Thank you ♥

Edited 2012-07-16 02:45 am (UTC)
[identity profile] ayane42.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 05:31 am (UTC)
wow that was just awesome!! i loved it!! just perfect!!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:44 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Comments are food for the writer's soul ♥
[identity profile] without-me.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 06:20 am (UTC)
BWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! Sooooooooo much goodness!!!

(And I, too, would love to read the Chopped timestamp! Just saying.)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:44 am (UTC)
So many requests for that timestamp...it may just have to happen! :)

Thank you for commenting ♥
[identity profile] xcziel.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 06:55 am (UTC)
♥ ♥ ♥! Jensen and his bro! Jared and the dogs! Slimy Paul and snotty Miranda! The fantabulous food descriptions! The kickass kitchen crew!

(Why does Jensen make such an ideal perfectionist chef and why do I always love it so much?)

*re-reads*

*adds story to the top of the list of favorite foodie fics*
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:43 am (UTC)
*adds story to the top of the list of favorite foodie fics*

Re-reads are one of the BEST compliments you can give a story, so THANK YOU! I'm so happy you can add my chef!Jensen to your list of favorites :)
[identity profile] cassiopeia7.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 07:09 am (UTC)
Tristan? Tristan?

Oh, you. Oh, you. I think I love you for this alone.

I'm crazy about All The Things, starting with the lovely writing. Adored the slow build of emotion between the Js, from Jared instinctively going to Jensen when he'd had it with his roomies, to Jensen realizing just who was keeping him sane, and everything in-between. And oh, yay! for Jensen finally coming to the conclusion that life at Riverside was killing him, and quitting in a quiet blaze of glory.

Your secondary characters were perfect, from the wicked awesome Gen, to voice-of-reason Dom, to lobster-slinging Libby. Demonic pastry chef Mark and "Doctor Sebastian" were strokes of genius. Perfect casting, just perfect! I even loved your horrid antagonists -- bitchy!Miranda and douchebag!Paul. *hopes that Libby finally shoved a pointy swordfish right up Paul's smarmy ass* Even the DOGS were awesome characters.

Also? You made me hungry. Repeatedly.

And this:
Exceptional, not to be missed, and worth a special trip. Jared has a world-class cock with exquisite shape, which is appealing to the eyes—a succulent rhubarb head and a wide shaft—as well as the other senses. Pleasing to touch; its heft settles perfectly on Jensen's tongue and tickles the back of his throat. A blend of tastes Jensen would enjoy sampling over and over, and aromas of sweat, cotton, and cologne that are drawn into his nose, completing the picture.

A blowjob described like a high-end review of haute cuisine? Now that's something you don't see every day. BEAUTIFUL. &hearts

In case I haven't made myself clear, I really, really, REALLY loved this fic. Bravo, you, bravo!

*apologies for the tl;dr*

Edited 2012-07-12 07:10 am (UTC)
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:52 am (UTC)
THIS COMMENT IS A MILLION KINDS OF AWESOME \o/

Tristan is the reason this ENTIRE STORY got written. It's a very famous restaurant here in Charleston and I just wanted this story to go along with the name. I loved Jared so much in this, from his optimism to counter Jensen's negativity, to the way he rationalized everything, but struggled at the same time. Ugh, he was great to write. And Jensen's work in the kitchen was just as enjoyable...I love all those details.

Secondary characters can really make or break a story for me. I tend to only use an RPF cast when they fit the characters I want to create - I hate shoehorning and love writing original characters. So of course, I love USING them all the time and fleshing them out. So I love that you enjoyed everyone! And I LOVE villains - I don't know who was the worst in my head...probably Paul since he was vindictive. Miranda had a cause, at least.

A blowjob described like a high-end review of haute cuisine?

Maybe it's weird to say, but describing things in terms of cuisine and taste was my favorite part of writing this. I smiled myself silly over that paragraph! So the fact that you picked those lines in particular is crazy/awesome.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for all this feedback! It's food for my writer's heart ♥
[identity profile] mandraco.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 07:39 am (UTC)
This is a fabulous, well-crafted story. I feel really bad about hating it just because you kept mentioning Chopped when clearly Top Chef is better. Lol.
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:42 am (UTC)
just because you kept mentioning Chopped when clearly Top Chef is better.

It was mostly down to the fact that I was watching a Chopped marathon as I planned and plotted, and [livejournal.com profile] dugindeep was like, "Jensen should be on Chopped!" I just couldn't let that go :) Maybe he makes the rounds of the food shows afterwards!

LOL. Thank you!
[identity profile] nazliy.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 02:52 pm (UTC)
snagged the pdf last night and IT WAS AMAZING. I really enjoyed and your kitchen was very believable since I know a bit about it from what I've heard from my cousin. I honestly found myself dancing on my chair after Jensen quitted his job. :D and Tristan :3
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:41 am (UTC)
After all the time I've spent in restaurants, I would hope all the details came out right :) You never know how that knowledge is going to come across to the reader! Thank you so so much for the comment ♥
[identity profile] brokenscreamx.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2012 04:08 pm (UTC)
I'm really sad to see this end but omg it was a fun ride. I will always love Jensen as a chef.

I am really glad that each secondary character had their own personality and they were realistic instead of just one dimensional because for me, I think that's what made each restaurant scene really come alive.

I also really liked the slow build up between Jared and Jensen but it was painful haha and the ending was beyond perfect.

Tristan!

This makes my heart weep just a bit!
[identity profile] kelleigh.livejournal.com wrote:
Jul. 16th, 2012 02:39 am (UTC)
I'm so happy you mentioned the secondary characters! I like using RPF characters when they fit the personality I'm intending to use, but for everyone else original characters are so much fun to create, and after planning the way they act and think, I can't not use them :) I had a great time writing Jensen's crew and the kitchen scenes.

Thank you so much for the amazing feedback on this story. My ♥ is very happy!
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